Tuesday, 20 November 2012

CRITICAL ANALYSIS: BALLAD OF BIRMINGHHAM AND AFRICA



I have read and analyze two poems which are “Ballad of Birmingham” written by Dudley Randall and “Africa” written by Maya Angelou. I have made up my mind to choose the poem “Ballad of Birmingham” and “Africa” because I think these poems is more interesting compared to the other poems. It is interesting in all aspects such as themes, tones, setting, and the language used. Furthermore, these poems are challenging because of the words used and the underlying meaning of each sentence.

                In “Ballad of Birmingham,” Dudley Randall illustrates a conflict between a child who wishes to march the streets of Birmingham with the other children and a mother who are trying to protect her child. The setting of place this poem are the church in Alabama and the house which the conversation between the mother and the child occurred. In addition, this poem uses the dialogue between a mother and a child to illustrate the message of the poem. Throughout the poem, the child is eager to go into Birmingham and march for freedom with the people there. On the other hand, the mother is very eager prevent the child from going because it is dangerous. The themes of this poem is racism and mother love. The racism happened between African-American in Alabama, which the church is bomb by the American. The repetition of line “…No baby, no, you may not go…” and “…for I fear those guns will fire…” shows the feeling of a mother who refused to let her child go march the streets of Birmingham because she knows that it is very dangerous.

There are different tones that can be seen in this poem. Firstly, there is a tone of innocence in the first stanza. The young child tries to act nice and innocent to her mother so that her mother might let her go to the march. That can be seen in line “…Mother dear, may I go downtown…”. Secondly, there is the tone of concern for her child's safety. Her mother tells her that there are dogs, clubs and hoses in the line “…No baby, no, you may not go, for the dogs are fierce and wild…” . These things were used on protesters and marchers to control the crowds when they grew too large and cannot be controlled. Next, there is the tone of joy in the fifth stanza and in the first half of the sixth stanza. The line “…the mother smiled to know that her child was in the sacred place…” shows that she is joyful that her daughter is going to church instead of going to the march. But, in the seventh stanza that tone of joy immediately turns to grief and loneliness when she heard the explosion. The line “…her eyes grew wet and wild..” shows the mother’s sadness of losing her child.

            On the other hand, the persona of “Africa” is the author Maya Angelou. She expresses that Africa is strong black women. She does this when she writes “…mountains her breast two Niles her tears Thus she has lain Black through the years”.  In addition, Maya Angelou describes "Africa" being destroyed by Europeans who took the children of Africa into slavery. It can be seen in line “…took her young daughters…’. The setting is in Africa as the title of the poem itself is Africa. The theme is almost the same as the poem “Ballad of Birmingham” which is racism. Black people are always being discriminate by the white people. This poem is also portrays the situation of war. The poet uses woman to personified Africa. For example, a woman “…deserts her hair…” and “…mountains her breasts…”. Personification and rhythm enhance the tone of this poem.

The tone of the poem is different from “Ballad of Birmingham” as “Ballad of Birmingham has different kind of tone which are innocent, concern, joyful and loneliness while “Africa” has changing tone which from pleasant to unpleasant to contemplative. The first stanza start with pleasant tone which the poet describes the Africa as a woman such as in the line “…golden her feet, mountains her breast, two Niles her tears…”. Later, it changed to unpleasant tone in second stanza which the poet writes about the woman is suffered. The line “…bled her with guns…” shows that the woman is suffering. Lastly, in the third stanza, the tone changed to contemplative the woman is rising and remember all her misery and history.

            One of the issues that can be seen in the poem “Ballad of Birmingham” is discrimination of black people.  This can be seen when the poet is trying to conveys his message in the line “…and drawn white gloves on her small brown hands and white shoes on her feet…”. Other than that, it can be shows in the line “…for when she heard the explosion her eyes grew wet and wild…”. In that line, we know that the church which is the sacred place is being bomb by the American white people.  Same as the poem “Ballad of Birmingham”, one of the issues highlighted in the poem “Africa” is racism. The racism happens between white people and black people. That can be seen in the line “… over the white seas, rime white and cold…”. That symbolizes white people. Racism can cause destruction to the surrounding and the people around. The people all around the world should not discriminate people based on the skin colour, religion and country. All people are same, the creature that is create by the Almighty God.

            There are many literary devices that have been used by Dudley Randall in the poem “Ballad of Birmingham”. One of the literary devices used is alliteration. We can see the use of alliteration in several lines such as “…for I fear those guns will fire…” and “…her eyes grew wet and wild…”. Other than that, the poet use repetition in his poem. For example, “…no, baby, no, you may not go…”, “…and bathed rose petal sweet, and drawn white gloves on her small brown hands, and white shoes on her feet…” and “…but that smile was the last smile…”. Furthermore, the poet also use assonance in line “…and bathed rose petal sweet, and drawn white gloves on her small brown hands, and white shoes on her feet…” and consonance in line “…and clubs and hoses, guns and jails…”. The next is irony in line “…the mother smiled to know that her child was in the sacred place…”. Last but not least is apostrophe. That can be shown in line “…O, here’s the shoe my baby wore…”.

            In the poem “Africa”, Maya Angelou use repetition in line “…over the white seas rime white and cold…”, “…remember her pain, remember the losses, remember her riches…” and “…thus she had lain…”. Other than that, she use alliteration in line “…sugarcane sweet…”, “…sold her strong sons…” and “…remember her losses…”. Next, we can see hyperbole in line “…two Niles her tears...”. In addition, the poet uses symbolism in her poem. The woman in this poem symbolizes Africa.

            In a nutshell, the poem “Ballad of Birmingham” and “Africa” has their own specialties and message. Those two poems discuss about the racism that happen in our world. All people in the world are the same. We should not discriminate other people based on their skin colour, religious and countries. We are all creatures that are create by the Almighty god.


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